Old new stuff

[darksayjian09]

well here's alot of old stuff i did. I think most of this stuff i didnt show
to much of. But i think i showed off most of my Uub's stuff i did.











Ok and here's the new old stuff i know i didnt put up on here at all. Atleast i think i didnt














oh and i was gonna make a game using the Cell and Tapion sprites but i just never got to it, eh. things happend -.-
let me know what u think of them. and all of the of later DBZ sprites were done out of Street Fighter sprites ^^
Old with the old in with the new i guess

[raitei]

Welcome back.

That's quite some lot you posted.
Well I've seen most of them and gave feedback though

Will give new feedback soon

[darksayjian09]

o.o
i see. I thought so. Well the only real new ones are the Cell and Tapion.
Not that new but new enought o.o

[faroh3k]

Hahaaaa, long time bro. Tapion is very nice, glad to see you still hanging around man. Broli's torso looks like it is sticking out or something... Nice work on all of them though

[raitei]

You know, I've seen Tapion and Cell, but can't remember your Yamcha

First off, the SF3 based edits just don't do.
They look out of portion and your spriting style looks too distinct from SF3.
Your own style looks unique.

Broli:
- Bad proportioning from SF3 bases.
- Broli's body clashes with the rest of the sprite.
- Folds on that skirt-thing looks flat, give it more shape.
- Boots look out of shape, they should be pointed


Your Yamcha looks great ;D

Yamcha:
- Pants look too plain, add some details like folds.
- His legs looks weirdly shaped, could be the proportions like placing the knee too low.

Cell actually looks good, but the proportions from SF3 are horrible

Cell:
- Shoulders seems way too wide for Cell
- Body looks a tad weird and is also too wide
- Legs are too wide.
- Cell's feet should be pointy, you made them look round.

Overall impression of Tapion is good.

Tapion:
- Some of his hair might get a tad longer and messier for more accuracy, looks good though.
- Ear could be longer too.
- Blue-shirt-thing on the bottom could get more shape.
- Orange-back could use a darker tone to give the impression of actually being behind.
- The orange-back and blue-front look flat, possible caused by the lack of details, shade and shape.
- Sword doesn't look accurate.
- Sword looks lik it's edged on 1 side, because the point looks like a saber/katana.


You might want to practice on editing feet and shoes and work on shaping.
To me it looks like you first determine the area you want to cover and then fill the shape in with shades and lines.
Try to give the figures more shape and depth!

That's it for now, hope it's useful to you!

[darksayjian09]

Thanks for the feed back as usual ur on point. Sorry for taking so long to respond I was very busy.

But for the most part i was only gonna do Cell and Tapion over but since you like Yamcha guess i'll fix those things u pointed out. Since the Thenewdude started back up on his Yu yu stuff again i'm gonna do the same. I'm gonna be posting up some new Genkai, and most likely start working on Jin or Kuwabara. Thanks for Feedback Raitei